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Alone in the dark,
immersed in her sorrow,
she lies still
broken in pieces

Take my hand
and leave this wasteland,
please don't give up...

(chorus)
Her stream of tears
flowing forever,
never-ending sorrow...
Waiting the melody of salvation,
she can only turn to...
Her dark memento

I can see
light in your eyes
Pitiful soul,
forget what you saw

Walk with me
as far as we can,
don't ever look back...

(chorus)
Her stream of tears
flowing forever,
never-ending sorrow...
Waiting the melody of salvation,
she can only turn to...
Her dark memento

Frozen in time
you will not wake up,
I have lost you...

Waiting for the melody of salvation,
eternally lost in...
Her dark memento
©2007-2009 *Hadarniel
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Odd, I got inspired to write a song all of a sudden.

Inspired by:
:bulletblue: :iconda-gamer:~Da-Gamer's poems
:bulletblue: The song by Within Temptation featuring Keith Caputo "What Have you Done"
:bulletblue: A rather recent deviation of mine named Dark Memento that was also the inspiration for the name

So, you think it's good? I've written very few songs in my life, and I think this is the first time I ask for an opinion on one of them. Probably needs some work, would like to know what kind of improvements could be made, thanks.
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It's wonderful and touching! I love it! :glomp:

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thank you very much Mone :hug:
I'm glad you like it :aww:
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You're getting better. Try not to abuse the "...", but else its nice.

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